The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart demonstrates the people
count
who
was
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were
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pursuing higher
education
in Britain every decade from 1970 to 1990, split by course type and gender. The trend for the number of men in full-time
education
is slightly fluctuating between 800 and 1000. It was reduced to around 850 in 1990/81 from their starting
count
of 1000 in 1970/71.
Then
, it rose to 900 in 1990/91.
By contrast
, the
count
for
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of
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men in part-time
education
steadily increased from roughly 100 in 1970/71 to a peak of over 200
at the end
of the
third
decade. Turning to
women
's
education
, the number of
women
in full-time
education
consistently increased from 800 in 1970/71 to over 1000 which is nearly more than half of its initial
count
in 1990/91.
Similarly
, The part-time
education
count
also
reflects the same pattern as that of full-time
education
. Starting with a
count
of just around 100 to 200 towards the end. In Summary, part-time
education
gained popularity among men and
women
over the decades.
However
, the majority of people taking full-time
education
in the later period of the decade are
women
.

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