You are planning a 2-day work training outside your city next month. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel regarding accommodation arrangement for your visit. In your letter, you should tell: introduce yourself and your company ask availability of their rooms tell him/her that your every arrangement and needs.

#-day #work #city #month #manager #hotel #accommodation #arrangement #visit #company #availability #rooms

Dear sir, With the

hope

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you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to appraise you I am Elen, the General Manager of Freshii restaurant, Niagara On The Lake, Ontario.

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is a worldwide chain.

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provides healthy food to customers. My main office Freshii University is located in

Bramton

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Brampton

, Ontario. I found it on the internet, your hotel name Days Inn, which address is 1324 Outtlete street is located near to my main office 1326 Fresh University. I need one room for myself. My training days are from18 -19 March

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2020. I ought to enquire about one room availability that I need for two days. My specific need is a single room with

comfortable

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a comfortable

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queen size bed, private washroom, microwave, Fridge, Television, Coffee maker, Bath Towels, Face towels and Hand towels, good quality

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soap, lotion, shampoo and conditioner. Hoping for your prompt response. Yours lovingly,

tehji

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this

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

148 words

4.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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In some countries, teenagers have part-time jobs while they are still at school. What benefits does this bring for the teenager? Are there any drawbacks?

Many people think that the best way to learn a culture is to learn the language of it. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?