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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter Advise them of your situation Explain how this is affecting you Request a new card

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Dear Sir, I am writing to complain about my student identification
card
 which has been lost
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 the bus during commuting between colleges to home two days before. Due to exam days, I preferred to bring only a small bag with some necessary things along with
ID
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card
 in it but in today morning, while returning borrowed book in the library I was surprised to know that it has been missed and could not find anywhere.
Absence
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 of
card
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 will affect me in several ways. I cannot borrow more books from the library for
further
 exams .
in
addition
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 it will be challenging for me to clear my dues of
current
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 session which will adversely affect admission
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new
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 session. I would like to request you to issue a new id
card
 so that I can give my exams with the help of books from the library which will
also
 be helpful in
further
 admission .any
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 step will be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely, Madhvi
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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
  • however
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