The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates some proposed

paln

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plan

plans

for

central

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the central

a central

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area of Islip

town

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Overall

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,The main changes to the

town

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will be a ring

road

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around the

centre

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.Various other developments will be

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apply

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houses and shops. Looking at the map as it is now,we can see that

main

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the main

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road

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runs through it is

centre

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from west to

eadt

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east

add

eat

.The

second

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map shows the planned

padestrian

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pedestrian

road

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.Traffic will be diverted

on to

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onto

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a dual

carriage way

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carriageway

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that will form a ring around the

town

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centre

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. Currently,there is a row of shops along either

sides

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of the main

road

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.The north side of

area

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the area

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planned

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is planned

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for

bus

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the bus

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station,shopping

centre

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,car park and new housing.The south side shops remain

same

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the same

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.The

town

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park

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park's

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size

reduce

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reduces

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and build more housing plans into a ring

road

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words town, road, centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

125 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

pedestrian-only zone
dual carriageway
current
surrounded by
propose
infrastructure
bus station
car park
residential housing
traffic flow
connectivity
green spaces
recreational areas
development plans
main features
town center

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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Today, newspapers and televisions are giving detailed descriptions on crimes. Some people believe such a practice will cause bad consequences and thus media should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

The youth crime rate is rising rapidly in many countries. What is the reason for this trend? What can parents and teachers do to solve it?

Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?