■The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. ■Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

●

This

Linking Words

chart illustrates the

percentage

Use synonyms

of

british

Change the capitalization

British

show examples

people

Use synonyms

giving

money

Use synonyms

to

charity

Use synonyms

at various

age

Use synonyms

range for the

years

Use synonyms

1990 and 2010. The ages were divided into 5

groups

Use synonyms

; 18-25

yrs

Use synonyms

. old, 26-35

yrs

Use synonyms

. old, 36-50

yrs

Use synonyms

. old, 51-65

yrs

Use synonyms

. old, and the >65

yrs

Use synonyms

. old

age

Use synonyms

groups

Use synonyms

. ●

At

Change preposition

In

show examples

the

year

Use synonyms

1990, the graph shows the top

age

Use synonyms

groups

Use synonyms

who are able to donate

money

Use synonyms

to

charity

Use synonyms

were the

people

Use synonyms

at

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

Use synonyms

age

Replace the word

aged

show examples

36-50 and the lowest are the

age

Use synonyms

group

Use synonyms

of 18-25

yrs

Use synonyms

old. The 36-50

yrs

Use synonyms

. old

age

Use synonyms

group

Use synonyms

are usually the ones who are already into investment and are

commonly

Replace the adverb

common

show examples

with

stable

Add an article

a stable

show examples

job, 40% of them gave

money

Use synonyms

to

charity

Use synonyms

. Meanwhile, the

group

Use synonyms

with

least

Correct article usage

the least

show examples

amount of donations are the ones at around 18-25

yrs

Use synonyms

. old. Most of the time

this

Linking Words

group

Use synonyms

is still at

college

Add an article

the college

show examples

level or entry level at work, with

minimal

Add an article

a minimal

show examples

amount to donate. 15% of

this

Linking Words

age

Use synonyms

group

Use synonyms

donated to

charity

Use synonyms

.

The

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

35% of the British

people

Use synonyms

at

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

Use synonyms

age

Replace the word

aged

show examples

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

51-65

years

Use synonyms

old were generous enough to help for a cause.

While

Linking Words

30% of the 26-35

yrs

Use synonyms

. old & >65

yrs

Use synonyms

. old (Middle

group

Use synonyms

) equally provided

on

Change preposition

in

show examples

the same

year

Use synonyms

. ●

However

Linking Words

by the

year

Use synonyms

2010, you can see

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

drastic change in

Use synonyms

percentage

Correct article usage

the percentage

show examples

of

donors

Use synonyms

for the

charity

Use synonyms

and

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

improvements

on

Change preposition

in

show examples

the

age

Use synonyms

groups

Use synonyms

as well. In

this

Linking Words

bar graph, you can see that the hard earners and near to retire

age

Use synonyms

group

Use synonyms

of 51-65

yrs

Use synonyms

. old, from 35%., 40% of them donated

money

Use synonyms

to

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

charity

Use synonyms

placing them as one of our

high paying

Add a hyphen

high-paying

show examples

donors

Use synonyms

. The

age

Use synonyms

group

Use synonyms

of 18-25 still remained as the least

donors

Use synonyms

at only 5% of their population donated

this

Linking Words

year

Use synonyms

. The

Second

Linking Words

and

equally

Change the word

equal

show examples

group

Use synonyms

of

donors

Use synonyms

were the

age

Use synonyms

group

Use synonyms

of 36-50 & >65

years

Use synonyms

of

age

Use synonyms

at the

percentage

Use synonyms

of

thirty five

Add a hyphen

thirty-five

show examples

. The

third

Linking Words

group

Use synonyms

, at the

percentage

Use synonyms

of 25 are the 26-35

yrs

Use synonyms

. old. ●The generosity of the British

people

Use synonyms

may vary with their

age

Use synonyms

and career in life.

This

Linking Words

bar graph only shows the

year

Use synonyms

1990 & 2010. To sum it up, I can conclude that the

age

Use synonyms

group

Use synonyms

36-50

yrs

Use synonyms

. old who

were

Change the verb form

was

show examples

the highest

percentage

Use synonyms

of

donors

Use synonyms

at

Change preposition

in

show examples

the

year

Use synonyms

1990 still continued to prosper and donate

at

Change preposition

to

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

charity

Use synonyms

by the time they reach 51-65

years

Use synonyms

old at the

year

Use synonyms

2010. The

age

Use synonyms

group

Use synonyms

of 18-25

yrs

Use synonyms

. old may

remained

Change the verb form

remain

show examples

as the least

percentage

Use synonyms

of

donors

Use synonyms

but we can't deduct their contribution to the

charity

Use synonyms

throughout the

years

Use synonyms

.