Some people think that job satisfaction is more important then job security while others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
this
essay we will have a look at the various criteria people consider for a
job
and
then
we will discuss the pros and cons of each of them. The main idea will be revolving around the importance of a permanent
job
vs t
he
overall
satisfaction
it provides which eventually motivates and helps to have a career goal.
Firstly
, from the childhood, every chil
dren are
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child
brought up
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is brought
with a fixed aim or a career goal with them. The children
in particular
will be very passionate about a field.
For example
, it can be a doctor, engineer, entrepreneur, photographer etc. So, they will have
this
motive of pusu
ing a m
following in order to overtake or capture or as accompaniment to such pursuit
pursuing
edical degree, becoming a doctor and
then
working in a hosp
ital which sur
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hospital, which
ely gives a great
satisfaction
on their profession
also
they will be very keen over pursuing their career goal. As stated in the above paragraph,
job
satisfaction
can really be considered a lot to propel once professional
life
. It is
also
can be defi
niely wei
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definitely
defined
divinely
ghed more than holding a permanent
job
. But
life
is not same for all. Now we will have a totally different, realistic approach to
life
.
Life
is totally different to different people. Even
though we
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Even though
have a dream and constantly work for it, things does
n't work out
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don't work
as the way we think.
For example
, people study something and they won't get a
job
towards their area of study due to various
life
circumstances they are pushed to some
other not
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some other
so satisfactory
job
which they do just meet their daily needs. In
such
a case, even
though we
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even though
enter a
job
with full
satisfaction
, we will lose all the enthusiasm over a period of time because a
job
is always a
job
. Repetitively doing a same task definitely bores people and it does
reduces the
Suggestion
does reduce
has reduced
satisfactory level. On that note, it is very clear that people cannot expect to enjoy a
job
and having permanent
job
is more important.
Finally
, on concluding even
though i l
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even though
e
a
refers to the speaker or writer
I
n towards holding a permanent
job
, i st
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
ll like to add that the above argument totally depends upon the attitude of the person.
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