The graph compares the percentage of international and the percentage of UK students gaining secound class degree or better at a major UK university. Summarise the infomation by selucting and reporting the main features.
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students
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in differently
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subjects
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the most. Both classes account for 80%. Nursing or English Literature represents the Unnecessary verb
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popularity at approximately 75%, and International Law made up the third
at 70%. While
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Electrical Engineer was Remove the comma
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least
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, Electrical Engineer was the second
favourite for International at 8o%. The most popular class for foreigner
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,meanwhile
international
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International
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, similar numbers of UK
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scholars
class
, at roughly 85% and 60% respectively.
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classes
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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