Your friend is coming over to stay with you. However, you will be away on vacation for a month. Write him/her a letter and say: – How to get the keys to your flat – How to operate the equipment in the flat, and – Suggest a few places of interest to visit

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Dear Riya, Hope you are doing well. As I wrote in my previous letter that I will not be able to postpone the finalized trip to my parents. I would be keeping house keys with Mr. Shukla at Flat no. B-302, Mr. Shukla stays home entire day, I have spoken to him, about your arrival on 2nd March. Once you get inside the house, you could operate my room which is fully remedied with necessity items. Our daily cook will be cooking for you with your

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

dishes which I have specially mentioned.

Also

, for transport take my car to roam around in the city. Would like to visit beaches here in Mumbai? In the evening you might enjoy visiting

Juhu beach

Suggestion

the Juhu beach

for the city’s street food and explore famous

sea food

edible fish (broadly including freshwater fish) or shellfish or roe etc

seafood

restaurant as these places are not far from where I live. I hope you are happy with

this

arrangement, but if you need any help or more information please let me know. Looking forward to hearing

for

Suggestion

from

you. Best Wishes, Tanvi

Sat Feb 29 2020

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

173 words

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