The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two bar
garphs
give information about British graduate and postgraduate students Correct your spelling
graphs
which
were involved in part-time Correct pronoun usage
who
work
, voluntary Use synonyms
work
, Use synonyms
further
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study
and unemployment after completing their college in the year 2008.
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Overall
, the number of postgraduate and graduate students Linking Words
were
the highest in Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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further
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the further
study
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while
their number Linking Words
were
the lowest in voluntary Change the verb form
was
work
in the year 2008.
From the first chart, the number of postgraduate students for Use synonyms
futher
Correct your spelling
further
study
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were
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was
greatest
, Correct article usage
the greatest
that is
, 2725.
Linking Words
According to
the Linking Words
second
pope, UK Linking Words
student
after completing their graduation planned for Fix the agreement mistake
students
further
Linking Words
study
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that
was dose to 30,000 post- lime Correct pronoun usage
which
Work
and unemployment were almost some ( 17,735 and 16, 235 respectively). Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Voluntary Linking Words
work
was 3,500 Use synonyms
2008
.Change preposition
in 2008
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