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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.
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Conversely
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,
in
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the
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apply
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night, the process is totally different and
electricity
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 generation will be stopped. The
water
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 will be pumped from the low-level
reservoir
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 to the high-level
reservoir
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 via the reversible turbines.
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, the intake valve keeps closing. During the day, there are three steps to produce
electricity
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. It is obvious that a dam stands in front of a river, which leads to a high-level
reservoir
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. First,
water
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 from the high-level
reservoir
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 flows to the
power
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 station through the tube as the intake is open.
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this
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, in the
power
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 station, the
water
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 can spin the reversible turbines to generate
electricity
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.
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, the
electricity
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 is sent to the national grid through
power
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 lines and the
water
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finally
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 flows into the low-level
reservoir
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. The photograph illustrates how a hydroelectric
power
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 station works to generate
electricity
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.
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, there are opposite processes in the day and night and
electricity
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 generation occurred in the daytime.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, water, reservoir, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
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