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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words.

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The given table compares the
consumption
 of five different types of fast food in Melbourne and it
also
 gives
future forecast
Suggestion
a future forecast
 of 2025.
Consumption
 is measured in units. Overall, It is clear that Hamburgers are eaten more both in
past
Suggestion
the past
 and in the present as
compare
Suggestion
compared
 to other options and It will remain popular in 2025 as well. A significant change will come
in
Suggestion
with
 the Salad option. At present, 38 units Hamburgers are eaten by people that are 2 units less than 2005 but it is predicted that their
consumption
 will increase up to 41 units in 2025. 2 units rise can be seen in the popularity of fried chicken that will increase 8 units more in the future year.
Biggest
Suggestion
The biggest
The big
 change will come
in
Suggestion
with
 the
consumption
 of Salads. Where in 2005, only 5 units were eaten
,
Accept space
,
in future it will eaten 41 units. 6 units of Fried rice and noodle were eaten in Melbourne in 2005 and opposite trend can be seen at present in their
consumption but
Accept comma addition
consumption, but
 it will remain same in 2025 with 9 units each.

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