The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration demonstrates the steps in the
food
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manufacturing process in America.
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, America's
food
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production has six linear stages that start with the shipment of the cow, as the livestock, meat source, and
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, producing the beef foodstuff for human consumption at home or restaurant. First of all, the cow is delivered by ship
in
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to
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the production area where the barn is available for
the
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apply
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cow
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cow's
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storage, shelter, and feeding.
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to that, the processing takes place,
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as
slaughter
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slaughtering
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, cleaning, and producing the meat, which will
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be cut into slices and
weigh
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weighed
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market standards. After that, some ingredients are added and curing the meat to maintain
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its
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freshness.
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, the products are packed in cans or sealed in plastics. Following that, the distribution building is the point of origin
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for
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transporting the products to the retail store and restaurant.
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A trailer
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truck is the means of transportation to deliver the products to the restaurant and retail store, in turn, chefs prepare and cook the
food
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, thereby, the family members and the
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chain customers enjoyed dining the tasty beef recipe.

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