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The bar graph illustrates the amount of cell phone and telephone users in seven
diffrent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
 countries
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a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada
Canada
, US, Germany, Denmark, UK, Sweden, and Italy. Overall, it is clear that the Italian people consumed the highest proportion of the mobile phone;
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, the least rate of the landline consumers
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was also noticed
also
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 noticed in the Italy. The Italy placed at the top position for cell phone consumption, at precisely 90%; while the Sweden accounted at
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-max state, and the figure
was
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were
 nearly 88 percent.
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, in the UK, there
was
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were
 around 85% of
the the
definite article
the
 people used mobile phones, which was3% greater than the Denmark.
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, we can see that the Canada consumed the minimum proportion of the cellular mobile during the whole timeline.
In contrast
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, in the Denmark, roughly 88% of the individuals were applied telephone, the maximum rate. Interestingly, there was an equal consumption noticed at both US and Sweden, at just below 70%, and the account stood the
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-top state.
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, the Italian people used the lowest proportion of the landlines, at just over 40%.
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