The table below shoes the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table explains the amount of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. The proportion is in
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thousands
thousand
and
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is calculated
is calculate
in
percent
according their categories. The research
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identifies
has identified
identify
seven
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types
type
of families that living in poverty in that country, and the
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categories
category
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that have less people was “aged couple” with 48,000 (4% of
this
kind of family and the lowest
percent
of the study), while the
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category
categories
categorie
that had more people was all
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households
household
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by
with
1,837,000 (11% of their
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category
categories
categorie
).
However
, the table display that the
the act of distributing things into classes or categories of the same type
classification
classifications
clasification
that have the most
percent
of people in their categories was sole parental with 21%.
On the other hand
, the investigation shows that the
second
categories that have more people was “couple with children” with 933,000, but their
percent
is only 12%, whereas the
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category
categories
categorie
“single, no children” get only 359,000 but
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these
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represent 19% of their
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categories
category
categorie
.

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