Task 2: Some people believe tat the activities of large multinational corporations mostly benefits the economies of developing countries. Other people take the opposite view and feel that these large multinationals are generally harmful. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Nowadays
Now a days
, most of the people prefer to
work
in
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a multinational organisation
multinational organisation
instead
of
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the domestic process
domestic process
.Our society is polarised into two groups almost equally regarding both the notions that myriads of people suggest that activities which is done by international corporations has profound impact on
country
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developments
developement
,
however
,
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the rest
rest
of the people think that it is harmful.Different people
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have
has
distinct mindset.In
this
essay, we would elucidate both the approaches along with my personal perspective. To commence with the
first
notion, some people claim that large organisation has positive growth of countries.
Firstly
, people
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gets
get
big platform where different people of another
country
work
and share views.Masses not only
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work, but
work but
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also learns
also learn
a plethora of things
such
as
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
differnt
languages, culture and religion which has a directly helps in the
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
developement
of
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the country
a country
country
.After learning these skills they do
(nontechnical usage) a tiny piece of anything
particle
practical
praticle
so society watch them
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,
,
which has
showing intellectual penetration or emotional depth
profound
proved
profoud
the striking of one body against another
impact
imapct
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on
in
overall
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growth of
growthof
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the country
a country
country
.
Secondly
, activities which
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are doing
is doing
in these type of organisation helps the people to think about
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a better future
better future
, learn different languages so they easily migrate to
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
another
countries and bright their future very easily
for the reason that; on account of
because
beacuse
they do not face language barrier as well as they get lucrative wages.I would quote an epitome that
last
year the
northern region of India where Hinduism predominates
Hindustan
hindustan
newspaper conducted a survey for finding the masses who agree to
work
with a big platform and they migrate people freely to another
country
, so it is beneficial for
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economic
economy
growth. Shifting towards the
second
notion
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,
,
a plethora of people
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suggests
suggest
that it has
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a detrimental effect on a country
a detrimental effect on country
detrimental effects on country
detrimental effect on
country
because it directly reduces the small scale business so more and more masses are not able to survive.
Furthermore
, according to the people offsprings and individual of our
country
learn bad habits
such
as different culture which not only impact the society but
also
provide hindrance in growth.
Besides
this
, if more and more masses are connected with them, the no high skills person
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thinks
think
about their own
country
they always prefer their activities and their religion. Hammering the
last
nail, after
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discussing
discussed
both arguments and counter arguments,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
would like to
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opine
opinion
that activities or skills help in
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honing
hone
the economy so it has more
any of various edible decapod crustaceans
prawns
prunes
brains
prons
instead
of harm.People get
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a better career opportunity
a better carrier opportunity
better carrier opportunity
and learn
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
numerious
things which help them in certain ways if they practice that and
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
socity
also
gets benefited.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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