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, advertising industries constantly use images
to influence, persuade and make people identify with what they see. The powerful attraction of images
is also
evident in the entertainment industry and even in the growth in mobile phones that can send photos as part of a regular personal 'conversation'.
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it is true that images
can send very powerful messages, they are only really effective as a means of communication when used together with
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