Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

I think that a creative
should be open to show their feelings and whatever he or she wants to express.
because I believe that writers, painters, musicians can create a better job if they have the freedom to say anything. So for
reason I agree with that the State should no putting restriction to
the artist
, if the government would control the art, perhaps many artworks couldn’t see the light, due to
sometimes make
sometimes makes
their work for criticism the system. For
, in Chile the group of music “Los Prisioneros” written a lot of their songs in Pinochet’s dictatorship,
Then wheter
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Then, whether
Then whether
the State has had control of the art, maybe
music wouldn’t exist.
On the other hand
, I think that the government shouldn’t support creative artists, because if there is money, they feel with the right to control them.
is sad, because in general being an
means living with few thins, but I am sure that
will happen if the art is financed from the State. To conclude, artists should feel freedom to show whatever they want, because their profession consists in open other minds. The
are experts on express in an implicit way, what is the worse for the society, so
always be annoying for government.
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