Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach art subjects, like philosophy and history, and only practical degree courses that maximises chances of employment. To what do you agree or disagree?

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Due to increasing university fees and inadequate employment opportunities for graduates, people are of the opinion that the universities should offer more of the practical subjects, than teaching art subjects

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as philosophy and history.I agree with the statement as practical subjects will help them to

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to become aware of through the senses

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the business world. A real world is

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complex in nature and to get employment in

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a dynamic and competitive environment is a very difficult task.In order to get a person is required to have a good practical knowledge.

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In business firms, they hire a person who had a practical experience.

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, these art subjects

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as philosophy and history, provides knowledge regarding the past events

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like what people thought

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during 1990's).These subjects do not teach us about what

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in actual fact

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is happening today in your world.These subjects only provide one time knowledge till exams and once the exams are over

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the person forgets everything.But

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, if a student is given a practical exposure there are more chances of retaining information for longer time.

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, it has observed that 95% of the people are able to retain information for

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longer periods

a longer period

when they see a particular thing being practically done. To sum up

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I strongly believe that the universities

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introduce practical courses so that individuals are well aware of the reality and

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to increase their chances of employment.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

231 words

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Rising university fees and scarce employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach art subjects, like philosophy and history, and only practical degree courses that maximises chances of employment. To what do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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