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The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information on the proportions of water which is used for various purposes in six countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart provides information about how much
electricity
 was generated and used by the top ten countries in 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the
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electricity
production
 was always slightly higher than
electricity
consumption
 in all countries, except
in
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Germany, and that
China
 and the
USA
 produced and consumed by far the largest amount of
electricity
. (
China
 and the
USA
 were the biggest producer and
consumer
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 of
electricity
) Looking at the first
data
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, on
electricity
production
, in more detail, it can be seen that the amount of
electricity
 which was produced in
China
 stood at 5,398 billion kWh (
bkWh
), which is the highest value on the chart, followed by the
USA
 at 4,099
bkWh
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kWh
.
Production
 of
electricity
 in Russia, Japan and India was 1,057, 936.2 and 871
bkWh
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kWh
, respectively. The amount of
electricity
 which was generated in Canada, France, Brazil and Germany all fell within
range
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 of 526.6
bkWh
 to 618.9
bkWh
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kWh
.
Finally
,
electricity
production
 in the Republic of Korea was the lowest, at 485.1
bkWh
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kWh
. Turning to
data
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 set on
electricity
consumption
, it is evident that
electricity
 of
production
 in
China
 and the
USA
 was
also
 the highest, at 5,322
bkWh
 and 3,866
bkWh
 respectively.
Electricity
consumption
 in the remaining countries all fell within the range of 1,038
bkWh
 (Russia) to 449.5 (Republic of Korea). Notably, Germany was the only country where
consumption
 was higher than
production
, at 526.6
bkWh
 and 582.5
bkWh
 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, production, consumption, china, usa, bkwh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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