IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 4.5

some people say that science and technology subjects are important while other say history subjects,what do you think?

#people #science #technology #subjects #history
Though
Suggestion
Tough
 to choose between the science and
technology
 subjects or history, is a debatable topic of the modern time.In my opinion, one should opt for the science and
technology
 subject 'Science and
Technology
'', play a vital role in our daily life where scientific knowledge keeps us aware of all the nutrients whereas
technology
 shapes our life
,
Accept space
,
making our life more comfortable. To talk about Modern Technologies, one name that comes to the mind is Steve Jobs, who has given, a modern man, the gift of Mobile phone, making the communication better than before.The knowledge of Science and
Technology
 is the need of the 21st century because new studies are helping us to fight against the challenges, like the plague, cancer and the dangerous outbreak, which has destroyed half of the population of the earth, affecting the economic structure is the virus which is known as Corona. One of the gifts of modern times is the Automobile industry in which modern cars have shortened the long journeys of days into hours. The past has its importance as it gives information about historical events. Past is a resource through which modern man has made discoveries and making more progress while taking help from the past. To conclude History, Science and
technology
 are the essential subjects for a man and they must be taught because the study of the past leads to new studies and inventions/discoveries.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: