The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of

water

used for industrial, agricultural, and domestic

use

. Overall, in Asia

water

is mostly used for agricultural purposes.

On the other hand

, in North America and Europe

water

is mainly used for industry. As presented in the graph North America uses the highest percentage of

water

in industry which is at 48

percent

. Followed by, agricultural used and domestic used which are at 39 and 13

percent

, respectively.

Similarly in

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Similarly, in

Europe, 53

percent

water

is used for industry and 32

percent

uses for agriculture.

Lastly only

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Lastly, only

percent

is domestic

use

In addition

, in Africa the highest percentage of

water

use

Suggestion

used

for agricultural purpose followed by domestic

use

and industrial

use

which is at 19 and 10

percent

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respectively. In fact, In Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia, Central Asia have the highest

use

water

for agriculture, which is at 88

percent followed

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percent, followed

by Africa and South East Asia which are at 84 and 81

percent

, respectively. In these three countries South East Asia has the highest used of

water

for industrial

use

which is at 12

percent followed

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percent, followed

by Africa and Central Asia which is at seven and five

percent

, respectively.

Furthermore

, Africa has the highest used of

water

for domestic

use

followed by central Asia and South East Asia, which

use

the same amount of

water

which is at seven

percent

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general