The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of
water
used for industrial, agricultural, and domestic
use
. Overall, in Asia
water
is mostly used for agricultural purposes.
On the other hand
, in North America and Europe
water
is mainly used for industry. As presented in the graph North America uses the highest percentage of
water
in industry which is at 48
percent
. Followed by, agricultural used and domestic used which are at 39 and 13
percent
, respectively.
Similarly in
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Similarly, in
Europe, 53
percent
of
water
is used for industry and 32
percent
uses for agriculture.
Lastly only
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Lastly, only
15
percent
is domestic
use
.
In addition
, in Africa the highest percentage of
water
is
use
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used
for agricultural purpose followed by domestic
use
and industrial
use
which is at 19 and 10
percent
,
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,
respectively. In fact, In Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia, Central Asia have the highest
use
of
water
for agriculture, which is at 88
percent followed
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percent, followed
by Africa and South East Asia which are at 84 and 81
percent
, respectively. In these three countries South East Asia has the highest used of
water
for industrial
use
which is at 12
percent followed
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percent, followed
by Africa and Central Asia which is at seven and five
percent
, respectively.
Furthermore
, Africa has the highest used of
water
for domestic
use
followed by central Asia and South East Asia, which
use
the same amount of
water
which is at seven
percent
.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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