The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of
water
used for industrial, agricultural, and domestic
use
.
Overall
, in
Asia
water
is mostly used for agricultural purposes.
On the other hand
, in North America and
Europe
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water
is mainly used for industry. As presented in the graph North America uses the highest percentage of
water
in
industry
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the industry
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which is
at
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48
percent
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. Followed by, agricultural
used
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and domestic
used
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which are at 39 and 13
percent
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, respectively.
Similarly
in Europe, 53
percent
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of
water
is used for industry and 32
percent
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uses for agriculture.
Lastly
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only 15
percent
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is domestic
use
.
In addition
, in
Africa
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the highest percentage of
water
is
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use
for agricultural
purpose
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followed by domestic
use
and industrial
use
which is at 19 and 10
percent
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,respectively. In fact, In
Africa
, Central
Asia
, and South East
Asia
, Central
Asia
have the highest
use
of
water
for agriculture, which is at 88
percent
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followed by
Africa
and South East
Asia
which are at 84 and 81
percent
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, respectively. In these three
countries
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South East
Asia
has the highest
used
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of
water
for industrial
use
which is at 12
percent
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followed by
Africa
and Central
Asia
which is at seven and five
percent
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, respectively.
Furthermore
,
Africa
has the highest
used
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use
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of
water
for domestic
use
followed by
central
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Central
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Asia
and South East
Asia
, which
use
the same amount of
water
which is at seven
percent
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, use, asia, percent, africa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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