The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart provides the information about Australian male and female unique
age
group
who perform
exercise
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exercises
on a daily basis in 2010. Overall, it has been noted that the
percentage
of Men' s workout has been decreased,
also
the women's
percentage
experience a slight decline in the physical activity. The
age
group
from 15 to 24 and 65 and above
maintains
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are maintained
the same
percentage
of women workout with 47.7 percent and 47.1
percent respectively
Accept comma addition
percent, respectively
per cent respectively
. While the woman with 25 to 34 years of
age
has 48.9%.
However
the steady increment in the exercise
rate
can be noted as 52.5
percentage
with the
age
group
in between 35 to 44 years of
age
. The female population of 45 to 54 years of
age
and from 55 to 64 years of
age
has almost the same
rate
of physical work with 53.3% and 53%. Total of 52.8%
of
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rate was
rate
was shown by the male
group
whose
age
was in between 15 to 24.
However
the
percentage
had come down to the point with 5% declination
rate
for 65 years above people. There is a fluctuation of
percentage
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a percentage
between the
age
group
with 42.2 %, 39.5% and 43.1% for the
age
interval from 25 to 34,35 to 44 years and from 45 to 54 years of
age
. There is a gradual increase of 2%
for
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in
of
the
age
group
of 55 to 64.

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