The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration demonstrates the steps in the
food
manufacturing process in the United States of America.
Overall
, it is a 6 stage, man-made, linear process. It begins with the delivery of the cow
and finally
produced beef
food
products
for human consumption.
The cow
is delivered by ship in
the production area and kept Change preposition
to
to
a nearby building for storage, and feeding. After that, in the processing building, the Change preposition
in
cow
is examined for food
safety procedures for human consumption and then
slaughtered to produce raw cow's
meat. The Change noun form
cow
beef
meat is then
cut into different sizes and classifications and then
packed according to
the desired packaging standard.
Following that, the packed beef
products
are placed in the distribution building ready for delivery. From this
, the trailer truck transports the beef
products
to the restaurant and retail store. By then
, the restaurant chef, as well as
the home cook, prepares beef
food
products
. Finally
, the delicious beef
meal is served in
Change preposition
to
the
family dining and restaurant customers.Correct article usage
apply
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