The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the stages in the food production chain of the United States. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration demonstrates the steps in the
food
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manufacturing process in the United States of America.
Overall
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, it is a 6 stage, man-made, linear process. It begins with the delivery of the
cow
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and
finally
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produced
beef
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food
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products
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for human consumption. The
cow
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is delivered by ship
in
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the production area and kept
to
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in
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a nearby building for storage, and feeding. After that, in the processing building, the
cow
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is examined for
food
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safety procedures for human consumption and
then
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slaughtered to produce raw
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cow's
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meat. The
beef
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meat is
then
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cut into different sizes and classifications and
then
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packed
according to
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the desired packaging standard. Following that, the packed
beef
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products
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are placed in the distribution building ready for delivery. From
this
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, the trailer truck transports the
beef
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products
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to the restaurant and retail store. By
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, the restaurant chef,
as well as
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the home cook, prepares
beef
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food
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products
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.
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, the delicious
beef
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meal is served
in
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the
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apply
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family dining and restaurant customers.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the first paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words food, cow, beef, products with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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