The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
With
booming
of technology development more and more people choose shop online>Suggestion
the booming
Peolple
believe with (plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
this
fast Linking Words
growthing
of online shop will lead to shut down of local business. I think the act of arranging in a graduated series
grading
this
prediction is highly Linking Words
pssible
.
Online shopping is changing people's purchase habit. It provides ultimate capable of happening or existing
possible
convient
to customers. Customers saved their time on transportation because most of the online Suggestion
convenience
convenient
store
provides free Use synonyms
shiping
. The the commercial enterprise of moving goods and materials
shipping
variaty
of a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
verity
variation
producson
local bring forth or yield
producing
stoore
cannot compare with a mercantile establishment for the retail sale of goods or services
store
stores
onlinne
stores. I tried to buy a novel in Chinese when I on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
syudy
aboard in Canada. I spent two days on searching in local bookstore and be a student; follow a course of study; be enrolled at an institute of learning
study
library but
the result was unsatisfied. Accept comma addition
library, but
Then
I Linking Words
tried find it
online and not only I find the novel I want, I Suggestion
tried to find it
also
found another Linking Words
sequeal
the author an educational institution
school
pulished
. prepared and printed for distribution and sale
published
This
experience happened at the tip of Linking Words
online
Suggestion
the online store marker
store
marker and it changed my purchase habit forever.
Some people Use synonyms
delieve
local stores accept as true; take to be true
believe
deliver
has
their own advantages. Some Suggestion
have
product
like groceries and clothing is easier to pick when the actual Use synonyms
product
is present in front of you. People can feel the freshness of the Use synonyms
fruirs
or try the size of the clothes before purchase them. the ripened reproductive body of a seed plant
fruits
This
advantage is Linking Words
canishing
due to the development of a sudden or mysterious disappearance
vanishing
online shopping system
. Online vendors provide free return for faulty Suggestion
an online shopping system
product
and online shopping website rate each Use synonyms
store
by their service and Use synonyms
product
quality. Use synonyms
customer
can choose the Suggestion
The customer
Customer
desire
Suggestion
desired
product
through keyword search.
To conclude with technology improving days and nights the gap between online shopping and local Use synonyms
store
is shrinking. Eventually online Use synonyms
store
will replace local Use synonyms
store
and become part Use synonyms
og
people's life.connects a noun with the preceding word
of
Submitted by jacobtianhy on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.