The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

With
booming
Suggestion
the booming
of technology development more and more people choose shop online>
Peolple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
believe with
this
fast
growthing
the act of arranging in a graduated series
grading
of online shop will lead to shut down of local business. I think
this
prediction is highly
pssible
capable of happening or existing
possible
. Online shopping is changing people's purchase habit. It provides ultimate
convient
Suggestion
convenience
convenient
to customers. Customers saved their time on transportation because most of the online
store
provides free
shiping
the commercial enterprise of moving goods and materials
shipping
. The
variaty
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
verity
variation
of
producson
bring forth or yield
producing
local
stoore
a mercantile establishment for the retail sale of goods or services
store
stores
cannot compare with
onlinne
on a regular route of a railroad or bus or airline system
online
stores. I tried to buy a novel in Chinese when I
syudy
be a student; follow a course of study; be enrolled at an institute of learning
study
aboard in Canada. I spent two days on searching in local bookstore and
library but
Accept comma addition
library, but
the result was unsatisfied.
Then
I
tried find it
Suggestion
tried to find it
online and not only I find the novel I want, I
also
found another
sequeal
an educational institution
school
the author
pulished
prepared and printed for distribution and sale
published
.
This
experience happened at the tip of
online
Suggestion
the online store marker
store
marker and it changed my purchase habit forever. Some people
delieve
accept as true; take to be true
believe
deliver
local stores
has
Suggestion
have
their own advantages. Some
product
like groceries and clothing is easier to pick when the actual
product
is present in front of you. People can feel the freshness of the
fruirs
the ripened reproductive body of a seed plant
fruits
or try the size of the clothes before purchase them.
This
advantage is
canishing
a sudden or mysterious disappearance
vanishing
due to the development of
online shopping system
Suggestion
an online shopping system
. Online vendors provide free return for faulty
product
and online shopping website rate each
store
by their service and
product
quality.
customer
Suggestion
The customer
Customer
can choose the
desire
Suggestion
desired
product
through keyword search. To conclude with technology improving days and nights the gap between online shopping and local
store
is shrinking. Eventually online
store
will replace local
store
and become part
og
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
people's life.

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