The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.

The table illustrates how adults and children use their money with a particular distribution of food, electronic equipment, music and videos in
UK
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the UK
during 1998. Overall, the main expenditure of children, regarding its gender is music,
however
, adults, men and women primarily spent their income on foods. In terms of electronic equipment and videos, most of their customers were children, specifically boys. The largest portion of Bristish consumable is food which women and adults gathered the highest allocation at approximately 39% and 25% respectively. Alternatively, the total percentage of
videos
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the videos
are only half of the population, with a peak of 18% for boys followed by 17% in girls. Music
in particular
, has the largest proportion to 40% in girls, 39% in children and 38%
in
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of
boys.
Furthermore
, the spent money in electronic equipment were primarily consist of children accounting for 23%, 18% for boys and
lastly
10%
for
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of
the men.

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