The table below shows the proportion of income spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.

The table illustrates how adults and

children

use their money with a particular distribution of food, electronic equipment, music and videos in

UK

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during 1998.

Overall

, the main expenditure of

children

, regarding its gender is music,

however

, adults, men and women primarily spent their income on

foods

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food

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. In terms of electronic equipment and videos, most of their customers were

children

, specifically

boys

. The largest portion of

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British

consumable

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consumables

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is food which women and adults gathered the highest allocation at approximately 39% and 25% respectively. Alternatively, the total percentage of videos

are

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only half of the population, with a peak of 18% for

boys

followed by 17%

in

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for

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girls. Music

in

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particular, has the largest proportion

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40% in girls, 39% in

children

and 38% in

boys

.

Furthermore

, the spent money

in

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on

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electronic equipment

were

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primarily

consist

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consisted

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of

children

accounting for 23%, 18% for

boys

and

lastly

10% for

the

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men.