The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying full-time or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
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The chart illustrates how many
men
and women
were pursuing their
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apply
further
education
in Britain, either in
Change preposition
apply
fulltime
or part-Correct your spelling
full-time
time
.
At a glance, the chart clearly states that Part-Time
education
is highly
utilized by both Correct quantifier usage
more highly
men
and women
than Full-Time
education
in the three time
periods. At the same time
, there is a gradual increase in Full-Time
Education
in
both Change preposition
for
men
and women
.
The number
of women
Part-Time
Education
seekers for further
education
started at around 700 thousand
women
in the 1970/71 time
period
, from
that Correct word choice
and from
time
the number
has increased exponentially. Where it maxed at approximately 1100 thousand
women
in the 1990/91 time
period
, and it is the highest as compared to men
as well. Speaking of men
, the number
of Part-Time
Education
followers have
started at the highest i.e., 1000 Unnecessary verb
apply
thousand
men
, and then
gradually decreased in the 1980/91 time
period
. Eventually, the count has
increased in the 1990/91 Unnecessary verb
apply
time
period
and closing
at around 900 Replace the word
closed
thousand
men
.
On the contrary
, Full-Time
Education
has always didn’t get the amount of craze as the counter part
does. The Correct your spelling
counterpart
number
of subscribers has
started lowest in the 1970/71 Unnecessary verb
apply
time
period
and closing
at the highest in the 1990/91 Replace the word
closed
time
period
for men
and women
as well. The only difference is there is a steady increase in the number
of fulltime
Correct your spelling
full-time
education
seekers in the case of men
, whereas
in the case of women
there is a sharp increase in the Add a comma
,women
number
between the time
period
1970/71 to 1980/81.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, education, time, number, thousand, period with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
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