Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main sources in many countries, but in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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discuss the negative impacts of the fossil fuel and
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, the advantage of renewable
energy
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few countries are supplying fossil fuels to all over the world and soon the resources will get exhausted due to
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the high
demand. The reproduction of the resources like coal, oil and natural gas are
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and further
cannot fulfil the upcoming population requirements.
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source
of
energy
to fly in
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the air
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source
is going to get exhausted and it may affect the air transportation.
Secondly
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the benefit
of using natural
energy
is to avoid air pollution in industries and transportation. The alternative
source
such
as wind and solar gives a pollution free environment and
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they are
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renewable energy
which can produce the
source
of fuels for the huge population without any demand.
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step forward to increase the production of
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solar powered vehicles
a solar powered vehicle
to provide pollution free nation and avoid the dependences of non-renewable resources like oil and natural gases.
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, switching to the alternate
source
of
energy
is mandatory to pursue. In conclusion, moving to the alternative
source
of
energy
such
as wind and solar is a positive development because it supports nature
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eco-friendly and can be
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regenerated
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