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The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates weekly
sales
 at a small restaurant in the downtown business district from October 7th to October 13th.Lunch's sale was almost
same
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the same
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 in
first
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the first
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 two days of
this
 week, on
day
 one it was $2400 and $2450 on
day
 two.On Wednesday, there was a good hike in
sales
 with $2595 but got decreased on
following
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the following
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day
 to $2375.On Friday, the sale elevated to $2500 but got dropped on weekends to $1950 and $1550 respectively.
Whereas
 when we look at the
sales
 at dinnertime, it's been seen that there was a frequent raise in
sales
 on Weekdays and experiencing a downfall in the
sales
of
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at
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 Weekends.
First
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The first
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day
 of the week started
with
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at
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 $3623,
got
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and got
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 increased on Tuesday to $3850.There was no significant change in
sales
 of
next
day
 but on Thursday
sales
 got reduced by $50.On Friday
sale
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sales
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 bumps up to $4350
whereas
,
at the end
 of
this
 week it had a sharp drop of $2900 on Saturday and $2450 on Sunday.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, day with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuations
  • peak sales
  • troughs
  • seasonal adjustments
  • promotional impact
  • customer footfall
  • external factors
  • forecasting
  • performance analysis
  • trend analysis
  • sales metrics
  • business district
  • revenue streams
  • consumer behavior
  • market trends
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