The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
diagram demonstrates the process of wave-energy
engine and its localization. Add an article
a wave-energy
Overall
, there are two options for the energy output apparatus instalment in which deeper water
is more expensive compared to shallow water
. Machine
located in the shallow end is low cost because it produces less energy and uses smaller waves. Correct article usage
A machine
However
, the machine
placed further
into the water
, although
,more expensive, but
production volume is significantly higher.
There are several steps involved in producing electricity through Correct word choice
apply
wave-energy
Add an article
the wave-energy
a wave-energy
machine
. First, the Fix the agreement mistake
machines
water
current goes through a cylinder shaped
Add a hyphen
cylinder-shaped
machine
with an opening at the bottom end. This
manoeuvre flows air through a chamber from top and bottom pushing on a fan like
Add a hyphen
fan-like
device
called a turbine. Change the article
a device
This
operation energizes the fans of the turbine at
the same time generates energy on Correct word choice
and at
the
one sideCorrect article usage
apply
,
Remove the comma
apply
while
releasing air on the opposite end.Submitted by fame8686 on
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