Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of the debate, and reach your own conclusion.

Now a day we can see in many public places, a poster or sign of "no
tobacco
/no smoking" is put up. Some countries feel that it is important to have laws against smoking in public places like restaurant, movie theatres, etc., On contrary to
this
many thinks that it is not needed. In
this
essay I would discuss both sides and conclude with my opinions. As we all know that
tobacco
and smoking are injurious to health not only for those who are using it, but
also
for those who are along with people using it, according to a research by Time it is found that more than 50% of the people who develop cancer of the mouth, throat, etc., are because of passive smoking. So,
one
should try to avoid smoking in places where many people are present.
Moreover
, not just cancer some people feel suffocating because of fumes coming from cigarettes.
In addition
to
this
, when you smoke in public places, many teenagers have
habit
Suggestion
a habit
of learning from others and when they find others using these things, they think it is good for them or it is cool to use these harmful products. To support
this
, Recently when I was shopping in the mall, I saw that a father with his family of 2 young kids were shopping and he was eating
tobacco
, when his kids saw that, they thought it some delicious candy and started asking his dad to give him
one
and when his dad said no and went ahead he went back and bought
one
for him.
This
shows why having these things can not only injurious to us, but
also
to our loved ones. On contrary to
this
, many governments believe that all citizens have right to choose and they are well aware of bad and good effects of using
tobacco
rich contents
also
it is up to them to buy or not to, how to use where to use and where not to.
For example
, many
government
Suggestion
governments
have started printing the ill effects of consuming
tobacco
and using cigarettes on the packet of it so that whoever consumes are well aware what they are having and how it can cause harm. To summarize, I think the disadvantage of using
tobacco
rich contents in public places outweighs the advantages and
hence
,
one
much think twice before using it in public places.

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