The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The bar chart below illustrates information about the profit of a state's export
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petroleum
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products
, engineered Use synonyms
goods
, gems and jewellery, agricultural Use synonyms
products
and Use synonyms
textiles
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year
2015 and 2016. The table, Fix the agreement mistake
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provides information about the development of each sector, compared with the Correct word choice
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year
2015 and 2016.
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Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
petroleum
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products
showed the highest percentage Use synonyms
in
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while
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textiles
experienced the lowest percentage. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
textiles
showed a huge upward trend in the changes in values.
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To begin
, Linking Words
petroleum
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products
experienced a number above 60 billion in both years. In Use synonyms
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place was engineered Linking Words
goods
, with merely 57% and went up to over 60% in the Use synonyms
last
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year
. Gems and jewellery were 42% in 2015 and showed a downward trend to 40% in 2016. Agricultural Use synonyms
products
were relatively the same amount during the period, with slightly above 30%. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
textiles
showed a number of merely 31% in 2006.
The largest upward trend in values was in Use synonyms
textiles
, with 15.24%. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, engineered Linking Words
goods
and Use synonyms
petroleum
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goods
were relatively lower, with an increase of 8.5% and 3%. Use synonyms
Finally
, gems and jewellery experienced a decrease of 5.18% in the final Linking Words
year
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally, furthermore".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum, products, goods, textiles, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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