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You are bored in your current job but you enjoy working for your company. You think you would be happier if you moved to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your employer. In the letter ask to be moved to a position in another department explain how you feel about your current position and your career say why you think changing your job would be good for you and the company

#job #company #department #employer #position #career
Dear John, I am really enjoying myself in our company. We have
great
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 environment
who
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 makes you want to stay in it and help the company to achieve goals and gain a lot more profit. And I would never leave the firm, even for another high-paying organization.
However
, I really want to move to another department in
this
 great place.I am currently a project manager in the marketing department.
Moreover
, I don't really feel like myself in here and it will not take me to a place I dream of. For that, I really think moving to be a Data
analyst
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 in the IT department will really help me achieve my goals. Especially that I recently took a Master degree in Data analysis. And for the company because
of
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the Data world has recently been a huge field for organizations to really beat
its
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 rivals. As well as helping me to accomplish my dreams. your
faithfull
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faithful
faithfully
shahd
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shahid
shared
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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