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Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. do you agree

#employers #holidays #employees #job
Vacations
also
 vital for everyone and it
also
 helps people to relax and make them feel motivated. To make the
work
 life balance employers should take an initiative on lengthy holidays than short breaks, if they start working on
this
 pattern, it may increase the efficiency at
work
 as well as it creates motivations among employees, which can result in better
work
. I completely agree with the above idea.
This
 is often obverse that, if a worker is working for a longer time it reduces the quality of task and employee can become lethargic, which can affect the performances of their job. That's the reason holidays are essential to rejuvenate the body and mind at the same time it should not be too short break of a day, its need for little longer, so that they will be able to rejoin the workforce with better energy and enthusiasm. Denmark recently made changes in their
work
 system, wherein there will be about 4 days working and 3 days off.
However
Accept comma addition
However, such
such
 changes in the labour law to help people
work
 with full motivation and dedication which at the same time increased the efficiency.
On the other hand
, lengthy holidays help employees with their wellbeing additional it keeps them to be active and away from any stress.
Moreover it
Accept comma addition
Moreover, it
also
 affected the health and because of which jobs at delayed and neglected.
For example
, if a person is not well rested they will not try for their
nextday
Suggestion
next day
. To conclude, In my opinion organisation should look into changing their
work
off
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
 laws for the betterment of both.
vacation
Suggestion
Vacation
 is must and it should be taken into consideration by the employer that it should longer and not short, because more periods of holidays help worker deliver the best
work
 and they
also
 will be in good health to perform better in future run.

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