The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graphs explain
about
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
computer
ownership
in terms of percentage
of Correct article usage
the percentage
population
between the years 2002 to 2010 and Add an article
the population
shows
the Change the verb form
show
ownership
on bases
of the Correct article usage
the bases
level
of education
for the year
2002 and 2010.
Overall
, it is clear from the first graph
, that the
Correct article usage
apply
computer
ownership
have
increased substantially from the Change the verb form
has
year
2002 to 2010. For example
, in 2002 the percentage
of
was approximately 55%, Change preposition
apply
whereas
it increased to 75% in the year
2010. But in
the below Change preposition
apply
graph
it explains Add a comma
,graph
about
different levels of Change preposition
apply
educations
and the Fix the agreement mistake
education
ownership
of the
Correct article usage
a
computer
. The education
level
is ranging from no high school diploma to postgraduate
Add an article
a postgraduate
qualification
. It is evident from the graph
that students with no high school diploma own less
computers than Change the quantifier
fewer
the
students with Correct article usage
apply
postgraduate
Add an article
a postgraduate
qualification
.
It is noticeable Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
form
the first Correct your spelling
from
graph
that the ownership
for
Change preposition
of
the
Correct article usage
apply
computer
have
gradually increased with Change the verb form
has
the
time, in the Correct article usage
apply
year
2002 the ownership
percentage
was less than 60%, and in two year
we could see a growth of more than 10%, Change to a plural noun
years
that is
in 2004 the ownership
has an increase up to 60 percentage
. Subsequently
, the growth has been constant till 2010, And when we compare the percentages of
2002 to 2010, we notice a 2/5 increase in the Change preposition
from
percentage
of the
Correct article usage
apply
ownership
.
The second
graph
explains about two time periods that
is
between 2002 and 2010. It explains Change the verb form
are
about
Change preposition
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
computer
ownership
based on the level
of education
. As the level
of education
increases the ownership
of the
computers Correct article usage
apply
increase
as well. The Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
ownership
of the computers in
Correct your spelling
is
also
dependent of
the time Change preposition
on
periods
. When we focus on the Fix the agreement mistake
period
level
of education
where the student did not have a high school diploma, the percentage
of students in 2002 was comparatively low than 2010
. It is the same situation with all Change preposition
in 2010
the
educational levels. The highest Correct article usage
apply
percentage
of ownership
was for postgraduate
Add an article
a postgraduate
qualification
. And the highest Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
percentage
for both the
Correct article usage
apply
year
were
noticed to be in the same educational Change the verb form
was
qualification
.Submitted by gyanaprasuunna on
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