The graphs above give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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computer

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ownership

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in terms of

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the percentage

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of

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the population

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between the years 2002 to 2010 and

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the

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of the

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2002 and 2010.

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, it is clear from the first

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, that

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ownership

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have

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increased substantially from the

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2002 to 2010.

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, in 2002 the

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was approximately 55%,

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it increased to 75% in the

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2010. But

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the below

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it explains

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different levels of

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and the

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of

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. The

education

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level

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is ranging from no high school diploma to

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. It is evident from the

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that students with no high school diploma own

less

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computers than

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students with

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qualification

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. It is noticeable

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that the

ownership

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for

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have

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gradually increased with

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time, in the

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2002 the

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percentage

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was less than 60%, and in two

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we could see a growth of more than 10%,

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in 2004 the

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has an increase up to 60

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.

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, the growth has been constant till 2010, And when we compare the percentages

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2002 to 2010, we notice a 2/5 increase in the

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of

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ownership

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explains about two time periods

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between 2002 and 2010. It explains

about

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the

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computer

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ownership

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based on the

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of

education

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. As the

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of

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increases the

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computers

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as well. The

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of the computers

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dependent

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the time

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. When we focus on the

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of

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where the student did not have a high school diploma, the

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of students in 2002 was comparatively low than

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. It is the same situation with all

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educational levels. The highest

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of

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was for

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qualification

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. And the highest

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for both

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year

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were

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noticed to be in the same educational

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.