Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you got off the plane, you left a bag there. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter • explain what has happened • describe the bag and its contents • say what you would like them to do about this problem

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you about the language I left while getting off the plane. I had booked Indian Airlines flight No.14XB5 from Mumbai to London
last
week
that is
, on March 4, 2020, in the name of myself John Paul. While I had one cabin handbag and one handbag, I had kept
cabin
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the cabin
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handbag under
the
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my
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seat of mine and travelled
along
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the destination.
However
, I forgot to collect my bag and got off the plane only to realise it when I reached the hotel. My suitcase is
Amercian
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American
Tourister made,
17 inch
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width,
25 inch
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25-inch
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length,
20 inch
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height, black carbonate colour with red stroller metal handle. Inside the suitcase are my personal things along with some documents related to my PhD course on Meteors. I am to
therefore
request you to find my bag and keep it in your custody. And once finding it, please let me know about it, you can email me the status. Later
on
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I will personally come and collect the suitcase by showing my passport and supporting documents. Your positive response in
this
regard is highly appreciated. Yours faithfully,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unfortunate incident
  • Flight details
  • Distraction
  • Valuable possessions
  • Sentimental value
  • Lost and found procedure
  • Safe return
  • Compensation
  • Assistance
  • Gratitude
  • Follow-up
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