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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Potok is the first and leading online crowd-lending service for
SME
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 in Russia. From the very beginning
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 2016 till 2019 a cumulative of more than $100 mln in business loans were issued to
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 companies. Potok reached the break-even in two years (in 2018) and has been profitable ever since. My areas of responsibility: – General
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 vision and planning Conducted transparent methodology of
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 development, ensuring that every member of the company has a clear understanding of current priorities, challenges and
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 criteria. The system was based on regular
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 research and thorough
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 analytics. Every task had a definite connection to
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 and business metrics and
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 goals and streams. It resulted in a smooth and efficient implementation of any changes, regardless of their complexity. – Management of
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 development teams Successfully implemented principles of
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 development process. Teams maintained steady processes of planning, control, review and self-improvement with a deep appreciation of
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personal opinion and constant feedback about the actual business results of every delivered task.
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, every team member was highly engaged and absolutely committed to creating the best financial service. – Marketing Built a stable and controllable
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 acquisition system with predictable metrics for every step of
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 Journey. Regular experiments and tests with a range of channels, messages,
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 pages with strict control over costs and profits provided the company with a deep knowledge of what works and what doesn’t concerning
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acquisition and retention matters.
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, the company had an ability to flexibly manage its marketing budget with
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 of short- and long-term impact on a financial plan and
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 workload of
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 Service,
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 and Risk departments. –
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 and
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 Support Departments Enhanced
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 department structure with the implementation of distinct
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 roles
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 steps of an acquisition funnel with clear
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 and guidelines for every step.
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 automated CRM, which was fully integrated with the
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’s back-end, it resulted in highly effective and controllable
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 with predictable scalability,
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 onboarding process,
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 assessment of every
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 manager’s performance.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • job application
  • personal information
  • hobbies and interests
  • marital status
  • relevant
  • useful
  • privacy
  • assessing candidates
  • qualifications
  • experience
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