The graphs below show the number of men and women in full and part-time employment in Australia between 1973 and 1993. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graphs below illustrate the proportion of choice in full and part-time
jobs
, which is based on the age Use synonyms
by
males and females Change preposition
of
Change preposition
in Australian
Australian
, from 1973 to 1993.
It can be clearly seen that Correct your spelling
Australia
the
large amount of men Change the article
a
tends
to do full-time Change the verb form
tend
jobs
. The rate hits the highest point, at 100% Use synonyms
men
Change preposition
of men
at
the age of 25 to 55 years old. On the Change preposition
between
Use synonyms
women
side, there has no permanent, Change noun form
women's
always
fluctuates substantially. Both full and part-time Correct pronoun usage
which always
jobs
are suitable for Use synonyms
mostly
Replace the word
most
women
.
More specifically, Use synonyms
to
men over 20 and under 60, more Change preposition
of
80
% of them had full-time Change preposition
than 80
jobs
in 1993, which was about 10% less than in 1973. Use synonyms
Thus
, lessLinking Words
5
% of them were in part-time employment Change preposition
than 5
in
the beginning of the period, and the percentage went up insignificantly.
Regarding Change the preposition
at
the
Correct article usage
apply
women
, the figures were shown to have rapid changes. Compared to 1973, in 1993 the number reached the peak Use synonyms
approximately
55% Change preposition
of approximately
to have
full-time employment. Change the verb form
having
Furthermore
, Linking Words
women
who are 35 to 29, showed the greatest proportion of part-time work was 15% more than in 1973.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the major conclusion drawn from the graph is that Linking Words
the
people are likely not to work after age 65 onwards.Correct article usage
apply
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