The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
people
who hold a science
qualification in Singapore
and Malaysia
. A prominent feature is that a significantly lower ratio of people
holds science
qualifications, that is
Master’s and Bachelor’s degrees in science
from university level
studies in both countries. Less than 5% of Add a hyphen
university-level
people
hold a skill in science
at a Master’s degree matched in both Singapore
and Malaysia
.
There is a significant difference in the proportion of people
holding science
qualifications at Bachelor
level between the two countries; Correct article usage
the Bachelor
while
this
number is 20% in Singapore
, in Malaysia
it is a mere 10%. The rate of people
with school leaving exams in discipline is slightly higher in Malaysia
than in Singapore
. 35% of people
in Malaysia
have a science
qualification at this
level, whereas
the number in Singapore
is 5% lower. Finally
, more than half the people
in both countries hold no science
qualification at all.Submitted by izumisagiri189 on
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