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Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

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It is argued that some people believe
,
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,
the violence on
television
 and in
computer
 games has a negative impact on the society.
This
 essay agrees with the statement because people try to copy
actions
Suggestion
the actions
 by watching various reality shows and violent games in
computer
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the computer
 which teach them to be aggressive in everyday
life
.
Firstly
, a few people
try
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tries
 to enact actions or stunts by watching the
television
 programmes in their home. The reason behind copying the actions is that they get fascinated and try to link the reel
life
 with the real
life
. They challenge themselves and try to perform
same action
Suggestion
the same action
 which requires supervision from the experts.
Hence
, they end up getting themselves hurt. In recent news, twenty-two year old man ended up his
life
 by trying to copy an act from one of the reality show by jumping from
fifth floor
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the fifth floor
 of the building
.
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.
Moreover
, addiction of violent games in
computer
make
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makes
is making
 the growing teenagers aggressive in everyday
life
. Games like going to a war by using swords and other utensils in
computer
 makes them impatient and short tempered. They tend to fight for short issues
instead
 of sorting it out.In 2019, a school boy murdered his small brother by holding his neck because he refused to give him
television
 remote.When police did the investigation
,
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,
they concluded that the boy was mentally obsessed with the game which had the concept to go
for
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to
 war and defend themselves. In conclusion,
Society
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the Society
 is negatively affected by the violence on the
television
 and violent games in the
computer
. I suggest that people should watch light, comedy shows and video games which will improve skills and knowledge.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pivotal
  • desensitize
  • catalyst
  • predisposed
  • harmless outlet
  • distinguish
  • controlled environments
  • empirical research
  • minimal or no direct correlation
  • socio-economic status
  • predisposition
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