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Many Families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.

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There are split opinions regarding
topic
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the topic
a topic
topics
 in present scenario abound individuals shift to different nation some masses believes that it is optimistic point for kids
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where as another group of thinkers support it is
tuff
not given to gentleness or sentimentality
tough
 for offsprings. In my opinion
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the former proposition appears to be more rational.
This
 essay will
further
 elaborate both positive and
pesimistic
expecting the worst possible outcome
pessimistic
 effects of
this
 trend and
thus
 will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriad of reasons which will
further
 explain
this
argument but
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argument, but
 the most preponderant
one
steams
(linguistics) the form of a word after all affixes are removed
stems
 from the fact that many people shift different nations there are mammoth benefits for
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
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Firstly
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little ones
learn
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learns
 new jargon as well as culture
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lifestlyes
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyles
 because they live and meet with new persons
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 So, kids easily increase their knowledge and learn new skills
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 Another pivotal aspect of
this
 argument is that if
family
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a family
families
 move
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 nationality minors are
study
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studying
 good schools or colleges because in
modern era there
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the modern era, there
the modern era there
 are many developed countries and all provide high standard
study
 if juniors
study
 in these schools the life is very good and after complete
study
 multifarious job opportunities
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 Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.
On the contrary
, the latter view
suggest
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suggests
 that there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of
this
trend but
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trend, but
one
 of the most alarming
one
 is that various families move own country to another principality it is challenging for kids
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Bescause
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Because
 the face
herculean
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Herculean
 to adapt
new culture
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the new culture
 and speaking
new dialect
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a new dialect
 in
different state
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different states
a different state
different States
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Besides
this
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 the
littleones
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little ones
 face laborious in make new friends because they
are not personally know
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do not personally know
are not personally known
does not personally know
 about
natuare
the essential qualities or characteristics by which something is recognized
nature
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Hence
, it is apparent why many are against
this
 trend
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 According to the arguments aforementioned above,
one
 can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of living in new nations because they learn new things and
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 after
complete
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the complete study join
study
 join will be numerous jobs with good salary package
.
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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