Many Families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.

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in present scenario abound individuals shift to different nation some masses believes that it is optimistic point for kids

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where as another group of thinkers support it is

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not given to gentleness or sentimentality

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for offsprings. In my opinion

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the former proposition appears to be more rational.

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argument, but

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from the fact that many people shift different nations there are mammoth benefits for

childrens

a young person of either sex

children

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Firstly

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little ones

learn

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learns

new jargon as well as culture

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;

lifestlyes

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

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because they live and meet with new persons

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So, kids easily increase their knowledge and learn new skills

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Another pivotal aspect of

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argument is that if

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a family

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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

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nationality minors are

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studying

good schools or colleges because in

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are many developed countries and all provide high standard

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if juniors

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in these schools the life is very good and after complete

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multifarious job opportunities

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Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.

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that there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

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different states

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different States

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Besides

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the

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little ones

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According to the arguments aforementioned above,

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the complete study join

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Many Families move to different countries. Some people think children can benefit from this, while others consider it is hard for children if families move to a foreign country. Discuss both views and your opinion.

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It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Rich countries should not employ skilled labour from poor countries, as the poor countries need the workers more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?