The diagrams below shows time spent watching tv by age and gender in the UK in 1995 and 1999.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about time spent by Men and
Women
of different old age periods watching television in 1995 and 1999 in the United kingdom
.
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Kingdom
Overall
, the graph shows that
the fact that the older age group of 65 years old and above spent more time Correct word choice
apply
in
watching Change preposition
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Tv
compare to the other youth period.
It is seen from the chart that both males and females between 4 to 15 years watched the
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Tv
for around 17 hours
in 1995 and in 1999. In the case of 16 to 24 year olds
, no significant change was in males, as they stood around 17 Add a hyphen
24-year-olds
hours
, but females reveals a rise from 21 hours
to 23 hours
.
The youth groups of 25 to 34 and 35 to 44 showed a
same pattern Correct article usage
the
was
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as
women
viewers spent more hours
watching television. In 55
to 64 old age period showed a noticeable change.Men spent 27 Correct article usage
the 55
hours
, but women
spent 31 and 32 hours
in 1995 and 1999 respectively. Men above 65 watched tv
for 3 hours
more in 1999 as well as
women
watched Tv
for 36 hours
in both years.Submitted by bachchanaznin on
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