The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs. Write at least 150 words.

The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. Write a report describing the information shown in the two pie graphs. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of three kinds of spreads (
margarine
, low fat and reduced spreads and
butter
) which were consumed over 26
years
from 1981 to 2007. Units are measured in
grams
.
Overall
, the consumption of
margarine
and
butter
decreased over the period given,
while
for
low fat
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and reduced spreads, it rose. At the start of the period,
butter
was the most popular spread, which was replaced by
margarine
from 1991 to 2001, and following that low fat and reduced spreads became the most widely used spread in the final
years
. With regards to the amount of
butter
used, it began at around 140
grams
and
then
peaked at 160
grams
in 1986 before falling dramatically to about 50
grams
in the
last
year.
Likewise
, approximately 90
grams
of
margarine
was eaten in the first year after which the figure fluctuated slightly and dropped to a low of 40
grams
in 2007.
On the other hand
, the consumption of low fats and reduced spreads only started in 1996 at about 10
grams
.
This
figure, which reached a high of just over 80
grams
5
years
later, fell slightly in the final
years
to approximately 70
grams
in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words margarine, butter, years, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • pie graph/chart
  • survey
  • cultural activities
  • leisure activities
  • participate
  • percentage
  • engage in
  • contrast
  • significantly
  • minimally
  • gender differences
  • equal participation
  • synthesize
  • trends
  • analyze
  • highlight
  • unexpected
  • popular/unpopular
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