The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.
The
table
shows the rates of household income Use synonyms
which
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apply
spent
on four items in five Add a missing verb
were spent
Eouropian
countries. Correct your spelling
European
Overall
, what stands out from the Linking Words
table
is that the level of housing is Use synonyms
dominant
than Correct quantifier usage
more dominant
others
in three of the countries(France, Germany and Correct article usage
the others
UK
) Correct article usage
the UK
whereas
in Turkey and Linking Words
Spain
people prefer to spend Add a comma
,Spain
the
most of Correct article usage
apply
the
income Change the word
their
for
food and drink.
Looking at the Change preposition
on
table
in more detail, in France and Germany the percentage of housing spending ranks first at around one-Use synonyms
third
, Linking Words
while
that of clothing Linking Words
are
the lowest share at 7% and 15% respectively. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
Similar
pattern can be seen in Add an article
A similar
UK
, housing spending is Correct article usage
the UK
observered
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observed
the
highest indicator at 37%, Change preposition
as the
while
the percentage of clothing and entertainment are the same at precisely 11%. In terms of Linking Words
Turkey
the figure for food and drink is the Add a comma
,Turkey
second
highest in the Linking Words
table
with 36 % which is approximately 4 times as high as the level of entertainment expenditure. Use synonyms
Finally
, in Linking Words
Spain
the indicator of food and drink spending is reported Add a comma
,Spain
31
%Change preposition
at 31
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which
that is
twice as much as the Linking Words
rates
of entertainment spendingFix the agreement mistake
rate
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