More and more people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, others think this will bring stress to the home. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Working at
home
it will bring benefit for
employee
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employees
the employee
and any organisation
this
is for
openion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opening
opinions
. Because working by staying at
home
for any employee can get enough
time
to engage himself
for
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in
his
work
.By getting fresh
environment he
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environment, he
also engage
Suggestion
also engages
has also engaged
is also engaging
himself for valuable
work
inside
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in
alongside he can help by staying at
home
.He can do
also
simple household related
work
within very short
time
alongside his office
work
,
also
get mental strength to do any
work
in
this
pandemic situation because now world
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
passing very crucial
time
about
coronavirus
. Some people
also
think
negative side
Suggestion
the negative side
about staying at
home
he
feel
Suggestion
feels
bored staying at
home
all day long. He can not get set outside environment what other employees are doing because by working physically present in any
work station
a desktop digital computer that is conventionally considered to be more powerful than a microcomputer
workstation
we can influence by others.
we
Suggestion
We
can follow other employees what they are doing by observing
them we
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them, we
can
also
get direction and
also
get mental strength to do
such
type of
work
. There is
also
other negative side if we
work
by staying at
home
if there there is a joint family or large family
members we
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members, we
cannot get enough
time
to engage ourselves for office
work
then
we will feel bored doing
work
by staying at
home
. After discussing both positive and negative
side I
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side, I
think doing
work
by staying at
home
it will helpful for us because we can engage ourselves both office and family
work
together.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Telecommuting
  • Flexi-time
  • Remote work
  • Work-life integration
  • Virtual collaboration
  • Self-discipline
  • Workspace
  • Burnout
  • Ergonomics
  • Time management
  • Distractions
  • Productivity
  • Commuting
  • Connectivity issues
  • Team dynamics
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