The consumption of the world's resources (oil, and water etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate.

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Recently, the rapid consumption of the world's
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mineral deposits has inflicted detrimental effects on both
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and other species. In
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issue will be cited. There are a variety of forces that drive
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issue. First of all, the populations in many countries, especially the developing ones have risen tremendously, which speeds up industrialization to meet the growing demands of the rising number of people.
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is clearly reflected in China where hundreds of factories are established and put into operation on a daily basis to accommodate more than 1.3 billion residents. Second of all, the combination of low awareness of the citizens and lax regulations from the government has contributed to the exhaustion of natural
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, in the middle highland of Vietnam which used to
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with countless species of trees, the forest has now been bare
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these two reasons.
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is a thorny issue, it can be dealt with by some methods. The first one is imposing population control. It is my opinion that
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should be considered temporary as in the long run, it can create
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population and
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quality
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force. The second solution is raising the awareness of citizens about the importance of preserving and protecting the world's
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.
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can be done by organizing educational programs or school activities. The third is seeking alternative sources of energy.
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can be risky and incur high costs, it can bring many promising results.
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, the government can pass and enforce stricter laws,
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higher taxes on businesses which operate on the use of
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, it can stagnate the economy. All things considered, the excessive use of
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is caused by many factors and it can be bridled by the aforementioned methods.
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