The consumption of the world's resources (oil, and water etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate.

Recently, the rapid consumption of the world's

resources

such

as oil,

fresh water

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or

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and

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mineral deposits has inflicted detrimental effects on both

human kind

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and other species. In

this

essay, some causes and solutions to

this

issue will be cited. There are a variety of forces that drive

this

issue. First of all, the populations in many countries, especially the developing ones have risen tremendously, which speeds up industrialization to meet the growing demands of the rising number of people.

This

is clearly reflected in China where hundreds of factories are established and put into operation on a daily basis to accommodate more than 1.3 billion residents. Second of all, the combination of low awareness of the citizens and lax regulations from the government has contributed to the exhaustion of natural

resources

in many areas.

For example

, in the middle highland of Vietnam which used to

lush

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with countless species of trees, the forest has now been bare

due to

these two reasons.

Although

this

is a thorny issue, it can be dealt with by some methods. The first one is imposing population control. It is my opinion that

this

should be considered temporary as in the long run, it can create

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aging

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population and

poor

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quality

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force. The second solution is raising the awareness of citizens about the importance of preserving and protecting the world's

resources

.

This

can be done by organizing educational programs or school activities. The third is seeking alternative sources of energy.

Although

this

can be risky and incur high costs, it can bring many promising results.

In addition

, the government can pass and enforce stricter laws,

along with

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higher taxes on businesses which operate on the use of

resources

,

however

, it can stagnate the economy. All things considered, the excessive use of

resources

is caused by many factors and it can be bridled by the aforementioned methods.