The graph below shows the total value of exports and the value of fuel, food and manufactured goods exported by one country from 2000 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graphs depict the trends of how much

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petrol, eatables and

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goods

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are produced by one nation and transmitted to the other nation between the

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2000 and 2005.

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, it can be clearly vivid that the total

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of

fuel

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falls in the

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2002 as compared

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previous span, but after the

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2002

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the entire

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of

fuel

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increased rapidly over the

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. Meanwhile, the worth of

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has fallen slightly.

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, the export of

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has fluctuated considerably. In the

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2000, the total

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of petrol exported to other nations was 3, 00,000 and it is falling slightly from 50,000 in the

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2002 but after

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year

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2002 the

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of total exports of

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rise dramatically and reached

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the

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value

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of 4, 50,000 in the final

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.

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, there was a decline

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fuel

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in every

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starting from nearly 50,000 in the

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2000 to 30,000 in 2002 and slowly it is felled down to 20,000 in 2005. Coming to the meal exported, there is a variation in the

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of

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exported every

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compared to the petrol exports. In 2000, roughly fifteen million

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are exported and in 2001 and 2002 it

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increased by ten thousand

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in 2003 it

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decreased to 20000 million and from 2003 the

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of eatables exported increased slightly.

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,

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value

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of goods produced is going under fluctuation compared to the

food

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and less

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of the good is exported over the

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to crude oil and

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. In the

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2000, 2004 and 2005 roughly only 3000 goods were exported and from 2001 to 2003 there is

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slightly

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fluctuation.