The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph above
depict
the range of Change the verb form
depicts
the
car which are used by residents and non-residents in British in ten years.
Correct article usage
apply
While
the number of resident’s
people whose travels by Change noun form
residents
cars
Fix the agreement mistake
car
is
increased before 2000, it starts to decrease Unnecessary verb
apply
after
this
time to make the number of visitor
higher than the average of the residents.
The main cause of Change to a plural noun
visitors
this
change is that the
people have to start Correct article usage
apply
pay
fees for parking. After three years a main Change the form of the verb
paying
different
Replace the word
difference
appear
when the government take Correct subject-verb agreement
appears
procedures
of Fix the agreement mistake
procedure
close
the highway of Wrong verb form
closing
west
area which make the number of Add an article
the west
a west
resident’s
trips more than the strangers again.Change noun form
residents
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