The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph above
depict
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depicts
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the range of
the
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apply
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car which are used by residents and non-residents in British in ten years.
While
the number of
resident’s
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residents
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people whose travels by
cars
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car
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is
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increased before 2000, it starts to decrease
after
this
time to make the number of
visitor
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higher than the average of the residents. The main cause of
this
change is that
the
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people have to start
pay
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fees for parking. After three years a main
different
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appear
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when the government take
procedures
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procedure
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of
close
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the highway of
west
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the west
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area which make the number of
resident’s
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residents
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trips more than the strangers again.

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