The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph above

depict

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the range of

the

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apply

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car which are used by residents and non-residents in British in ten years.

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the number of

resident’s

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residents

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people whose travels by

cars

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car

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is

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apply

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increased before 2000, it starts to decrease

after

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this

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time to make the number of

visitor

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visitors

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higher than the average of the residents. The main cause of

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change is that

the

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people have to start

pay

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paying

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fees for parking. After three years a main

different

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difference

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appear

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appears

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when the government take

procedures

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procedure

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of

close

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closing

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the highway of

west

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the west

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area which make the number of

resident’s

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residents

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trips more than the strangers again.