the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people funding
money
to charity by 5 different age ranges for the years 1990 and 2010 in UK
.
Correct article usage
the UK
overall
,the
people in the past Correct article usage
apply
has
given more Correct subject-verb agreement
have
money
compared to present
.the pattern differs at the age Add an article
the present
50
in the two years.
In 1990,above 40% of the people of Change preposition
of 50
age
36-50 donated more Add a comma
,age
money
in figure
.the 18-25s contributed less Add an article
the figure
money
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