the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

the chart below gives information on the percentage of british people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of people funding
money
to charity by 5 different age ranges for the years 1990 and 2010 in
UK
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the UK
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.
overall
,
the
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apply
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people in the past
has
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have
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given more
money
compared to
present
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the present
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.the pattern differs at the age
50
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of 50
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in the two years. In 1990,above 40% of the people of
age
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,age
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36-50 donated more
money
in
figure
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the figure
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.the 18-25s contributed less
money

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