It was observed that in some countries not enough students are choosing to study science subjects at universities . What are the causes ? What effects does this have on society?

According to some recent observations on the number of university undergraduates who study
science
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today most students feel reluctant to take
science
classes
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From my viewpoint
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since
science
education is complex and time-consuming process in which students are required to have a natural flair
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insufficient number of students go
further
in
science
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Consequently
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this
may have a profound​ impact on society, affecting
science
literacy levels of people as well as the image of a
country
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First
and foremost
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one should be naturally gifted and try desperately to make a breakthrough in
science
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and
this
demands great patience
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Most university students obviously lack
natural ability
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the natural ability
to study
science
subjects
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I think
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this
is the main reason that causes a growing reluctance among them.
Moreover
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science
research is
lengthy and difficult process
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a lengthy and difficult process
whose outcomes might be unsatisfactory
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and spending years and putting in a great deal of effort seems
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at times
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less likely to pay off
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This
decline in the number of students who study
science
subjects has an adverse effect on
country's reputation
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the country's reputation
a country's reputation
as improvement in
science
is of utmost importance in determining the status of a
country
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Countries
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for example
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that have distinguished and professional scientists always take
leading part
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a leading part
the leading part
leading parts
in international policy
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and vice versa the ones that lack
respected
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respect
scientists are usually economically disadvantaged as they are less likely to have power in ruling the world
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Not only is
country's status
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the country's status
liable to lower if students stop learning
science
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but the system as well as methods of educating the citizens of the
country will be soon
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country will soon be
out-of-date in consequence of which inhabitants of
this
country
might be educationally backward
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In conclusion
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since studying
science
subjects are
lengthy and difficult process
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a lengthy and difficult process
which requires innate ability, fewer and fewer students have interest in it. As an outcome
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this
will profoundly impact the society
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making people scientifically illiterate and the reputation of a
country
far lower.

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